| jxgod2002 发表于 2010-4-28 21:42 只看TA 14楼 | ||
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| war19910817 发表于 2010-7-19 09:22 只看TA 17楼 |
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| 我以为这是纯学院类的呢，原来是玄幻类的…… |
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| sexiongxiong 发表于 2010-12-4 21:08 只看TA 18楼 |
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很经典的一篇魔幻文章！一个男人征服一个女子学校，我们梦中的理想啊！ 而且这些女老师们还身手不凡！身怀东方的仙法武术和西方的精神魔法！设定的很不错！ 但H的部分写的不怎么样！要写再细腻一点就好了！而且这些女人臣服的也太快了！可以挑几个武力高的来长时间调教一下！这样就完美了！ |
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| allison811 发表于 2010-12-17 09:32 只看TA 20楼 |
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| it is very interesting for author to use such setting which combining the east and the west. Too bad that all characters are only teachers. I think it is more fun if students are involve in this case which it might take a lot of work by just thinking different situations. Compare to others, I think it is sad that the husband was once murdered by his wife and now he come back for revenge. |
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